Year 6: Student Adver (From Swindon Advertiser)

Year 6: Student Adver

12:49pm Wednesday 11th February 2009 in Student Adver By Kilmington Primary School

The Student Adver is interesting as it is about children our age. In this paper I like the sport section as it is about different children playing the same sports but against teams we have never heard of. In this paper I wish the paper has our football team in it as they are really good after they beat our rivals Dalwood 2-0 with our B team and 6-0 with our A team. In our local paper I want to see more exciting articals not about ‘A great Panto’ more like ‘Primary school beat rivals in football’. This would be great as it would be more interesting like the Student Adver.
By Harry J

I like the Student Adver because it is good to see what children do as well as what adults do. It is also good to see a child’s view of an event because it may be different to an article written to go in a normal paper. I would like to see some things in the next issue of the Student Adver that go beyond schools and into children’s life outside school, such as events in Swindon that would appeal to children. I would like something for children in our local paper, because then, when children are waiting around they could read it.
By Finlay Q

The Student Adver is a really good paper. I like the way the children’s stories are put in the paper. I like reading about the pupils progress and how they get on at school. I like the big bold and catchy headlines. I like the sport that the pupils have been doing. I know there is a bit about pupils progress but I think if you added more it would be even better. I also think there should be more about the children’s work.
By Laura V

The Student Adver is very clear and I like all the photos of children working. The bold headlines are clear and tell you what the text is about. Children share their opinions and express what they think about issues. The Student Adver needs more information about the school and where the school is and more about what the pupils do. I would like information and pictures of our school in a newspaper telling people about our school and when we hold our Christmas show more people will know about it and maybe come and watch.
By Victoria G

Kilmington school years 5 and 6 have been wondering wheater we could have some more interesting pieces of information in are local newspaper. I have thought that we could have some events that happin in school not just the villige like what the amount of money the school raised or how the football team did in there match or how are they playing or how well there doing in the finals. Also I would like to se funny things like there was a mistakes at the Christmas bingo or the ref didn’t turn up at a football match. Year 5 and year 5 have been wanting things like this in our newspaper for quite along time we have mentioned the football teams, funny things. We would also like to mention in the local newspaper prices in the shops and all this information has come from year 6 please help us to get what we want.
By Harry C

The Student Adver articles are really interesting and fun to read. I think it is a really and very well thought about. The children really put effort in the articles and that they have come out so well! I think maybe the newspaper needs more pages. I would love to see a newspaper like this in our vollage as it would let the villagers and parents see what there children have been up to.
By Maico

This newspaper is fantastic, it is so interesting. I can’t wait until the next newspaper. I want more. It must be have had to be so exciting to have Gordon Brown to come to your school. I can’t believe those two girls ingested there parents alcohol cupboard. Next time in the newspaper could you put information and stories about Kilmington? That would be great. I would like us to be in the paper because we would be known about and more people will come. I would be so good if we had the head and deputy girl and boy in there and a speech about us.
By Yazmin F

The Student Adver is very good and I would love to have one here in Kilmington. I think the children put real effort in this and worked really hard. My favourite part of it was about the prime minister came to the schools in Swindon. If I got this paper everyday I would want to see more sport about the schildren and some dates for pantomimes. I would like to see more of these in the future in Kilmington. I would love to have a student newspaper here so I would write some articales for it. I would like to see one in Kilmington to find out what school does what and which is the best. I would definitely like to write about my animal park where I live.
By Jake C